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Friday, August 28, 2015

Monarch: Chapter Eight

To begin with the Prologue of this serial novel, Monarch, please start here. 

Chapter Eight

THE LOCAL FOREST RANGER, Lewis Stevens, was an old man with long, yellowish grey hair that matted against his face in an oily tangled mess. He had a week’s old stubble growing on his gaunt face and he sucked hard on a mangy cigarette that he’d started smoking earlier that day. Classical music, from a radio station 30 miles south, rolled in through the speakers, accompanied by the occasional hick-up of white noise and static. Like everyone else in this town, he drove a beat-up old truck that got 2 miles to the gallon and had more rust spots than chrome or quality paint.

Lewis was tired. He was tired of this crap-hole town and the people that lived in it. He was just thankful that he didn’t have to hang out here much, as his cabin was several miles into the forest, away from people. He hated people—how they looked and acted, how they treated each other, and the fact that they were always glued to the television or watching some sicko blood fest of a movie. He had visited the town’s two-screen theater today, hoping to catch a good Meg Ryan flick, but instead had to sit through some movie where they tortured back-packers in Asia. He was pissed and disgusted that someone would actually spend money to make a film depicting torture for pleasure, and even more disgusted that people would pay to see it. To him, it was nothing more than a snuff film that belonged to the pimps, whores, and drug addicts in the city. He had seen only 30 minutes of it before getting out of his chair, demanding his money back and telling off the manager of the joint for showing such crap. Though not a perfect angel himself, Lewis did know when something was wrong with a society, and he wanted no part of it.

The night was darker than usual. A thick setting of fog had rolled in before the storm, and he could barely see anything as he drove through the winding roads of the forest. It was hard to startle Lewis Stevens, man of the wild, protector of the forest, but on this lonely journey back up to his cabin in the forest, something gave him a pretty intense fright. He’d been driving and through the swirling fog, and he could swear he’d seen a woman standing on the side of the road, looking pale and scared and alone. He laughed about it after the initial shock wore off, and blamed it on the 30 minutes of movie he’d endured earlier that evening.

One long drag and he finished his cigarette. He flicked the smoldering butt to the floor and exhaled deeply into the cab. He lowered the window a few inches to air out the cab and allow some cool air to ventilate the stuffiness he felt around him. Up ahead, some more headlights cut through the fog, but pointing at a different angle than they should have. The lights cut through the fog up and to the side, illuminating the trees that bordered the road. Lewis grumbled something fierce as he slowed his truck down enough to stop just before reaching the source of the lights. He climbed out of the car and made his way through the fog that weaved around him like specters in a ghost story.

“Anyone out here,” he called into the night, just before he realized that the truck was upside down and resting on the crumpled cab. He stared at the truck a few seconds, sorting out the twisted mess of metal, and realized that the truck belonged to the Hacoms in town. He took a few more steps toward the heap of metal. Broken shards of glass crunched beneath his boots, reminding him of the sound of breaking bones. For the hundredth time, he cursed that stupid horror movie. The fog was so thick that even a few feet away from the truck it still blocked a full view. He knelt down beside the cab and looked inside, trying to wave the fog away and clear his vision.

“Hello?” he asked into the darkness, “Tim? Jamie? You’ll all right in there?” His dirty gray hair hung around his face and he knew that if someone was looking out at him, he’d be a scary sight to see. He heard a slight scraping inside the cab, followed by, “Jamie?” The voice was quiet and pained, belonging to Tim Hacom. Lewis climbed even further into the cab and reach around inside. He stopped short, recoiling slightly when his hand brushed up against a matted wet pulp of bloody hair and skin.

“Tim, is that you?” Lewis asked, “How bad are you hurt?”

“I can’t move my legs,” Tim responded weakly. “My legs are stuck underneath the dash board. It think… they’re broken. Is Jamie out there with you?” Lewis backed his head out from the window of the cab and glanced around, even though it was next to impossible to see anything in the fog. He shook his head and leaned back inside. He remembered the woman on the side of the road, the one who had startled him. He brushed aside the thought, focusing on the task at hand. Focusing on saving the dying kid.

“No. It’s just me out here. Where is your wife?” Tim replied, “She went for help. You didn’t see her on the road or anything? She’s been gone a long time and I’m really worried.”

See, Lewis thought, this is why the human race is dying. This guy is so preoccupied with that woman of his that he’ll bleed out while worrying about her. Stupid really. He leaned further inside to try and see how much of Tim’s legs were underneath the dash. The fog had seeped into the cab of the truck, making it hard as hard to see inside as it was outside.

“Tim. Are you bleeding?” Lewis asked, not really caring but trying to keep the kid talking. Lewis knew that if he was still bleeding, he’d have been bleeding for a long time and should have been dead from loss of blood. Lewis could hear Tim feeling around his body, searching for cuts and gashes. Tim said, “no, I think everything dried up. I think I’m okay except my legs.”

“Okay,” Lewis said, “I’m going to run back to my truck to get a flash light, I’ll be back in a few seconds.” He hesitated, “I don’t know if I can, but I’m going to see if I can get you out of here.”

“Can you look for Jamie? I think she’s out there and I think that she needs help.” Tim asked, again going back to that confounded woman of his. Worry about her when you can actually do something about it, Lewis thought angrily. He almost said so, but stopped himself. He knew he was too grumpy, especially with other people.

“Listen, I’m sure Jamie is okay, she probably made it to town and the sheriff is on the way.” He stood up and made his way back to his car through the swirling fog. He opened his door and rustled around under the seat. A few seconds later his hands settled on the cold steel of his flashlight and he pulled it out, clicking it on to make sure that it still had life. A bright beam of light cut through the darkness. He pointed the beam outside the truck, and the light caught something that made him jump slightly. For a second, it had looked as though something stood several feet away, watching him. He had distinctly seen a pale face through the fog, framed by something black. He shook his head and grumbled, “Damn movies.”

He walked quickly back to the overturned truck, sure that his mind was playing tricks on him. Of course no one was out here, he reassured himself, its damn cold. He leaned down and shone the flashlight into the truck.

“Still okay, there Tim?” he asked. Tim looked over at him and smiled into the beam. Tim said, “Mr. Stevens. I thought that sounded like you. I am sure glad that you drove along, this has been one rough night.” The boy coughed, sending a fine mist of blood and slobber into the air. Lewis shook his head, knowing that the kid was in rough shape.

“I’m sure the night has been hard,” Lewis responded. He moved the light away from Tim’s face to his legs to see how badly damaged they were, and as he did, he saw the face though the window just beyond the other side of the truck. It startled him so badly that he almost dropped the flashlight. His breathing intensified and his heart pounded so hard that it ached inside his chest. He tried to ignore the overwhelming anxiety building within him and pointed the beam of light everywhere he could, trying to catch another glimpse of whatever prowled out there. He tried to tell himself that it was an animal, but no. He had seen the face, grotesquely similar to a human face, but different.

Tim’s legs were pinned from his knees down, and Lewis didn’t think he could get the kid’s legs free without climbing inside the truck and pushing up on the dashboard with his legs. Even then, the legs probably would not come free without cutting some of the dash away. Lewis found it hard to concentrate, though. He kept looking over his shoulder, or glancing through the broken windows of the truck. The image of that face burned in his mind, and he was unable to think of anything else.

“What happened, Tim?” he asked, trying desperately to focus on the task at hand. Tim shook his head slowly, getting weaker by the moment, as if just being awake and talking expended too much energy.

“We were driving along, coming back from the lot I just bought, you know, where I’m going to build our home.”

Lewis nodded—he’d seen the lot several times while visiting different areas of the forest—Tim continued, “Jamie said she saw something standing on the side of the road, then she got to acting really strange. She kept touching her head, and then she screamed at me for no reason. Next thing I know, some bozo threw a huge rock at us and it smashed our windshield.” He stopped and he looked sheepish, if it was possible at a time like this, in the middle of the night, pinned beneath a truck that had flipped over, “I guess I just lost control of the truck and we crashed. Pretty much everything is a blur since then, except when Jamie left.” He tried to push up on the dash to free his legs, but the effort was futile. He continued, “I’ve been awake for an hour or so, a little less dizzy and groggy. I’ve been trying to get out from under here since, but” he nodded to his unmoving legs, “as you can see, I haven’t had a whole lot of luck.”

Lewis was afraid to shine the light anywhere else but at Tim—he was sure that something lurked and waited for him out there in the fog and shadows, and he didn’t like it. The feeling was strange to him because the forest had never made him afraid—a sensation that only added to the uneasiness. He asked, tentatively, “Have you seen anything strange out here?”

“Not really. Just heard animals and things out there in the woods. I think the mind really plays around with you more when you’re alone in a place like this.” Tim chuckled a little, and then more seriously, “I can’t stop thinking about Jamie, though. I think she might be in trouble. I mean, she should have made it to town by now, even walking.”

Lewis thought for a moment, sweat building on his dirty hairline as well as on the small of his back. The white face floated in his mind, leering and mocking, waiting for the flashlight beam to wander away from reality and into the unknown. Goosebumps swelled on Lewis’ skin, causing his arm and leg hair to stand on end. For a moment he wondered about the anatomy that fueled the feeling of fear and the effect it had on the body. He realized he had a decision to make. Everything added up in his mind, reminding him of something that had happened a week ago in the woods. Something he had tried very hard to forget. Those memories and the feelings associated with those thoughts came flooding back. He remembered the bodies. The monster. It felt like a dream, and he still didn’t know if it was real or not, but the thoughts caused the fear ache in his belly.

“Lewis?” Tim asked, trying to break the silence, “What do you think we should do?” Lewis watched him lie there in the truck, completely helpless. He answered, “I need to radio for help. The radio is in my truck.” He motioned with the light and his head toward his vehicle, still dreading the fact that he would be alone in the fog for a few moments before reaching the safety of his truck. He stood reluctantly and turned away from Tim. Something big and dark swished through the fog between him and the truck. He jumped back, almost dropping the light once again. A branch cracked to one side and he thought he heard a whisper in the darkness just beyond the beam of his light. He started toward his truck, but suddenly he lost all orientation and sense of direction. His light cut into the fog, supposedly in the direction of his truck, but he couldn’t be sure. The shadow crossed again in front of him, again darting through the beam of light. Lewis saw a leg, long and grey, and part of the body, as the thing darted into the darkness. His arms and legs seemed to lose all feeling and became cold. He forced himself to take a step closer to his truck, lying to himself about his situation, trying desperately to feel a small amount of comfort.

“The radio…” he whispered, and stepped forward. He stepped on some glass and it cracked, causing him to jump slightly. Sweat ran down his shoulder blades and into his pants, pooling in his already damp underwear. Glass, not from under his foot, cracked only feet away from where he stood. He flung the light in that direction and caught another hurried glimpse of a figure, crouched over and snarling. He threw the flashlight in the direction of whatever had joined them out in the middle of the forest, (probably only a bear, the rational side of his mind kept insisting) and chugged for his truck. He jumped inside and slammed the door shut, panting for only a fraction of a second before turning the ignition and starting the big diesel engine. He jammed the truck into gear and sped off into the swirling fog, not once looking into his mirror. Tim was on his own tonight, he thought. He had no idea what had happened out there in the fog or why he felt the way he did, but he wanted no part of it. Forest ranger Lewis Stevens, man of the wild, drove quickly home, slowing only once to flip on the cab light and glance quickly in the back seat, making sure he had no unwanted passengers.

To be continued next Friday, September 25, 2015, the full novel to be revealed in parts by Halloween.  


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Friday, August 21, 2015

Monarch: Chapter Seven


To begin with the Prologue of this serial novel, Monarch, please start here. 

Chapter Seven

The sun had set and the darkness had overwhelmed them several hours ago. The fog blanketed the ground in thick and heavy clouds. The sounds of the forest had returned to normal, a gift that comforted for a short while, but Jamie heard a strange quality in the sounds, as if listening to a recording of nature. The sounds of the birds and animals and crickets seemed false, somehow.

Blood flowed from the gash in her forehead, into her eyes and made it hard to see, but it didn’t stop her from searching frantically around the inside of the overturned truck. Her beautiful blonde hair was nothing but a mess of matted and dried blood, sticky in some areas and caked hard to the skin in others. As far as she could see, nothing lurked outside the truck but the forest and the normal inhabitants of the trees. In fact, nothing had been there since the last transmission through the radio-

(I am coming)

-but it didn’t shake that sickening, nasty feeling she had felt for several hours now. She rolled to her side to make sure her husband still breathed steadily. Blood pooled around him, but the bleeding had stopped. His breath sounded raspy and shallow, but she was grateful for the sound. It comforted her to know that although out of commission, he was here with her now. The night grew colder with each passing minute, however, and she knew that he needed medical help soon or he may not make it. Hell, she needed medical attention too, or she might not make it either. The cuts and bruises she had from the wreck were bad, but she felt like a psychiatrist would help the most at the moment. It felt like her sanity was slowly pulled from her mind, in long sinewy strands of coherence. At first she thought she had simply made up the feeling of losing it as a reaction to the accident, but was now sure that someone or something had searched the darkest and most secret corners of her mind.

“Impossible,” Jamie muttered, shaking away those thoughts and returning her attention to her husband. Even thoughts of him, though, reminded her of the man in the road. The shadow that had watched them as their truck careened out of control. Tim had wakened from his haze long enough for her to ask him about the man she had seen standing next to the road. He hadn’t seen him, but she was positive he had been there, and equally as sure that he had something to do with how she felt during the accident, very similar to her current feelings. Jamie’s mind and body and soul had been violated and she felt the pangs of terror in her bowels, despite how much she tried to calm down and be rational. Nothing helped to ease her mind, however, and the horror would not cease. So deeply afraid.

Tim coughed, spitting a fine mist of blood into the air and a sick glob of clotted blood onto his chin. He moved slowly at first, jerking his arms and torso as if to the beat of some song, but it quickly became a brutal pounding, his muscles convulsing violently. His legs here still pinned underneath the dashboard so Jamie had no idea if he was still losing blood below his waist.

Tears burst from her eyes as she watched the man she loved spasm and twist, subject to nature’s fury. More blood seeped from his mouth and nose and he stared up at the seat of the truck with a sick and dead look that made her decision for her, he needed help and she was the only one who could get it for him.

But the dark, she reminded herself, that voice.

The spasms lasted for a few seconds longer, then died down until he was silent and still again. He closed his eyes and returned to whatever hell he entertained on the stage of his unconscious mind.

She loved him more than anything; she had given him everything, and would not stop now. She refused to see him die because something in the night frightened her. For the longest time she had convinced herself that someone would notice them missing and come looking, or that someone would drive down this road, but she knew she just kidded herself, prolonging the inevitable. They both needed help badly she no longer cared what was waiting for her when she climbed out of this truck and walked the four miles or so to town. She crawled on her elbows until her face touched her husband’s cheek. She nuzzled against him, kissing his ear and smelling his skin.

“I love you Tim.” She said simply, and began to cry. “I don’t want to leave you, but I don’t know what else I can do. You’re hurt and you need help, you need to see the doc.” She kissed him on the forehead first, then moved her body closer and kissed him on the lips. Not a hard or passionate kiss, but one that conveyed enough feeling. She touched his cheek gently and pulled away slowly, inching her body backward toward the window.

“Baby… I love you. Please stay with me.” Tears spurt from Jamie’s eyes and rolled down her cheeks, carving streaks in the blood and dirt that caked her skin. She choked on a sob as she pulled her fingers from his face and pushed up on her hands to climb through the broken window.

Glass covered the ground outside the truck, cutting into her palm and fingers—blood oozed from the new gashes. She gritted her teeth and pulled herself completely into the open, out from beneath the over-turned truck. She yelped as she stood up, her hair pulling her to the ground. For a moment she thought that Tim had grabbed hold of her hair, keeping her away from the darkness, but her hair had just caught on a piece of jagged glass sticking out of the window sill.

Once untangled, she stood and glanced around, looking for some demon to come screaming through the fog out of the dark shadows of the woods. Thankfully the moon shone brightly onto the road in front of her, the shadows from the trees cast on the asphalt like long, boney arms and skinless fingers. She turned and looked back at the truck, regretting her departure from her husband. Her insides felt hollow and she had no idea how she would make it to town. She began to walk, not noticing the specter of a man standing in the shadows just beyond the road. The figure was huge and lurking, magnified by the darkness and the slight moonlight. His breathing was ragged yet deep. He watched the woman begin walking toward the refuge of lights in the distance. A low chuckle floated out of the shadows, sounding more like a rabbit stuck in a trap and dying. No refuge, not anymore.

***

The front door slammed behind the Sheriff as he stepped out onto the porch that surrounded the police station. Lettie, still inside the police station at her desk, tried to reach the Hacoms on the radio. Ever since the transmission, Lettie had been acting very strangely, nervous almost, as if she expected something bad to happen. Of course, the transmission had sent chills down Jim’s spine, unnerving him as well. But Jamie Hacom had laughed, and he didn’t think that a woman would laugh if she was in trouble. Lettie somehow knew that there was something more to it, and had tried calling their apartment and their families. She had also tried the radio multiple times, calling frantically and waiting for a response that didn’t come. The strange thing, Jim admitted, was that no one knew where they were. He figured that if no one heard from them in the next few hours, he and Mark would head out and run a quick search of the town.

Jim was not apathetic about his job or his town. Quite the opposite actually, he cared for the people in this town and their well being probably more than anyone else. But his wife had been right during their heated conversation earlier that day. Not much happened in the town; no disputes raged between families or other townspeople, and not many outsiders visited or even drove through. Everyone pretty much belonged to the same conservative political party and they shared mostly similar ideals. If a dispute arose, or even a fight (heaven forbid) it happened at the bar, after a couple of the more rough locals got liquored up and cranky. No, the transmission scared and unnerved him, but it certainly was nothing to get upset or lose sleep over. He was sure that it could and would be explained when they finally caught up with the newlywed couple.

Jim stood on the patio, sipping his hot and slightly burned coffee. The night grew darker than usual, and he assumed it was because of the storm that raged in the east. Every few minutes the charges in the air would ignite, lighting the bruised clouds at the center of the storm. A loud clap of thunder would rumble, barely audible from where Jim watched, but he knew that wherever the storm hovered, the thunder exploded monstrously loud.

The storm was coming, and Jim could feel the charges in the air deepening, smelling like the air did when a load of laundry was just taken out of the dryer, full of static electricity. His thoughts drifted to his wife and all thoughts of the radio transmission left his mind. He supposed he would call her back tonight. Deep down, he knew that he was the one that needed to change if his marriage was going to work. But that’s the real problem, he supposed, not knowing if he wanted the marriage to work at all. If it hadn’t been for his son, he would have walked away a long time ago—a horrible thought, but probably true.

He shook out those depressing thoughts, reminding himself that he had made promises to his wife and son, promises that he should keep the best he could, despite what he now felt. He took another sip and stared at the diner across the street where several people were just leaving. The diner seemed to be the only place where people were still up and moving around and it certainly housed the only lit windows in town, aside from the police station. The fog had rolled in thick and deep, and a fine mist covered the street, making it glossy in the moonlight. The flashing yellow light up the street only added to the surreal, dream-like appearance of the empty street. Carved pumpkins, their eyes flickering from the light within, were placed carefully on porches along the street to commemorate the coming of the day of the dead.

“Gonna be a cold Halloween this year,” he muttered to himself just as a single truck, its headlights cutting through the fog like knives, drove down the lonely street and pulled into the station’s parking lot. Mark jumped out of the car and marched up to the porch.

“What the hell was that radio thing about? Jeeze La Weeze, I thought the freakin’ depths of hell were opening up in my truck, and then she laughed, talk about creepy!” Mark heaved as he climbed the steps to stand with the sheriff.

Jim chuckled lightly—his deputy had a habit of adding a touch of drama to everything, talking so fast his words sounded slurred. Mark was a nice guy, a native to Mapleton with a wife and 6 kids, he was tall and skinny, lanky even, but he had a nice build, which helped him keep away from the Ichabod Crane look. As he walked up to the porch, upset and freaked out, Jim laughed heartily, thoroughly enjoying the scene and his own commentary in his head. Mark held out his hands, expecting an answer to his question.

“I don’t know what it was,” Jim stopped laughing, serious again, “but it sure has got Lettie uptight.” He took another sip of his coffee. The mug was almost empty and the remaining coffee was getting cold. A few more minutes of the night, he decided, and then he’d call his wife.

“Has anyone tried to call them? Or their families? I mean, Jeeze.” Mark sat on the top step, exasperated.

“Lettie’s been trying to reach the Hacoms but can’t get a hold of them, and their families don’t know where they are either.”

“Well good. I went over to where Tim works, but he wasn’t there either. Guess they went out of town?” Mark mused.

“I’m thinking that they were fooling around or something, and somehow their cell phone connected in with the radio. I’m sure they’re alright.” Jim said. He added, “I mean, we can’t know for sure until we talk to them, but I figure if they really do have some problems, they’d radio in again. Right?”

Mark nodded as he eyed the coffee mug and said, “Coffee at night? I thought you got off here 10 minutes ago?”

“I think I’m going to wait this one out tonight. I’ll stay here, and sleep on the couch if I get tired.” Jim finished off the coffee in his mug and set it on the railing on the porch. Mark fell quiet, knowing exactly why Jim was staying. He asked, “Trouble at home?”

“Yeah. We just can’t seem to work things out.” Jim said, and then glanced up at a particularly large flash of lightening. He nodded to the storm, trying to change the subject. “Got a big one coming in. Looks like it’ll be a whopper.”

“It’s kinda strange for this time of year too,” Mark said. He hesitated, and then said, “Everything seems strange today. I couldn’t put a finger on it, but the feeling I got when little Jamie Hacom came in on the radio just about summed up the way I’ve been feeling all day long. Something big is headed our way, I think.”

“The storm. I feel it too. It just sat there all day today, just building. I imagine when it does come our way, seeing that the wind don’t change, it’ll be a doozy.” Jim wrapped his coat around him a little tighter and turned to look inside. Lettie was crying again, frantically trying to reach someone on the phone. Jim said, “Listen, Mark. Why don’t you head on home? I got it covered tonight.”

“You gonna send Lettie home too?”

Jim nodded, “I think she needs to get home. The radio thing pushed her over the edge.” Mark stood up and started toward his truck, he turned and said, “If you need anything, Jim, even just to go home and see her. I can come back you know. Just give me a call.”

Jim smiled, “Thanks Mark. Get home and get some sleep. I’ll let you know about the Hacoms too, if I hear anything.”

They were silent for a few seconds, before Mark nodded and climbed into his truck. He started up the big diesel engine and pulled out of the lot, leaving Jim alone again with his thoughts.

Something different floated through the air and he knew that he wasn’t the only one to feel it. Mark had said so and Lettie was pretty near hysterics, probably having decided that the Hacoms were dead or something. Something was just not right, even on a beautiful and cold night as tonight. He shook his head, thinking that he just needed a good night’s sleep and some time to concentrate on his family. Maybe he’d take a couple of weeks off and go with his family on vacation somewhere. He smiled at the thought, knowing that his wife would be excited with the idea. It had been so long since they’d done something fun together. He sighed miserably, and turned to go inside and let Lettie go home and relax. Suddenly, the overwhelming feeling that he was being watched swept over him. He stopped and turned around. The diner was mostly empty, except for two people sitting at a table near the window. It surprised him to see Henri, the only pastor in town, sitting with someone else he didn’t recognize. Henri usually didn’t talk much with people he knew in town, let alone strangers. Jim shrugged and looked down the street, which was empty. The fog had gotten thicker, obstructing his view. He thought that the fog would keep people inside—and it was getting cold. He assumed most people would already be snuggled up in their beds, but the feeling was insistent. He was certainly not alone. He could feel eyes boring into him. He didn’t know why that bothered him so much, but it just added to the itchy dark feeling that had been growing inside him throughout the day. A low rumble floated in from the east, followed by several flashes of light.

It’s the storm, he thought, nodding to himself as he opened the door and stepped inside. If anything was ominous and foreboding, it was the mass of God’s strength building in the east. But the power that emanated from the storm seemed darker than anything from God, Jim thought. He brushed the thought aside and closed the door behind him.

To be continued next Friday, August 28, 2015, the full novel to be revealed in parts by Halloween.  


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Friday, August 14, 2015

Monarch: Chapter Six


To begin with the Prologue of this serial novel, Monarch, please start here. 

Chapter Six

A loud burst of static erupted from the radio on Lettie’s desk, as well as the radio clipped to Jim’s shirt, interrupting their conversation about him and Cindy. Both jumped a little, startled. Lettie reached over to turn the volume down. Jim held his radio close to his mouth and spoke, “Mark? That you?” Mark, a young, single kid and his only deputy, had left Mapleton to attend a university, and then decided that the small town life suited him better. He’d been working with the small police force for almost five years now.

Through the radio, Mark answered back, “No, boss, I thought that was you. Must have been a cloud o’ static floatin-” Another explosion of white noise, even louder and more prolonged, sounded through the speakers, cutting Mark off in mid-sentence. The static sounded different from the normal, occasional static they sometimes heard on the radio, it had a deeper, more metallic ring to it—as if someone was rubbing a microphone against steel wool. Jim listened carefully and thought he heard people talking within the noise and then, suddenly, the static disappeared to nothing. No one spoke, all of them waiting for another burst of static to pour through the speakers.

“What was that?” Lettie asked nervously. Jim guessed that she probably heard the same voices within the sound that he had. Jim shrugged and held the radio to his lips again. He said, “Hello? Is there anyone on this frequency? Be advised that this is a police frequency, for emergencies only.”

They heard something very quiet in response to Jim’s statement: a woman crying softly. Lettie turned up the volume so the woman’s sobs could be heard clearly throughout the office. She whispered, “Do we know who that is?”

Jim shook his head, squinting his eyes in concentration. The crying grew louder and then stopped, leaving them listening hard for any other sounds, but none came. It must be a prank, Jim thought, these things just don’t happen in these parts. It had sounded like a woman hiding, crying despite her efforts to remain silent. The sounds were genuine but these things simply did not happen in these parts.

“Ma’am, this is Sheriff Halloway. What’s going on?” he asked into the radio. They all held their breath, waiting for a response. The woman spoke, fear choked in her throat. “I don’t want to be alone. Please come back…”

Lettie started to cry herself, “the poor thing,” she whispered. Jim spoke again into the radio, “Where are you, Ma’am? We don’t want to leave you alone, but we need to know where you are.”

Silence.

Then: “Please wake up, Tim. Tim, please. I don’t want to be alone.” The woman continued to cry. Lettie looked up, startled. She said quickly, “That’s Jamie Hacom. Tim’s her husband.” She reached over and pressed the ‘speak’ button on her larger radio system.

“Jamie,” Lettie said loudly, willing her voice to carry through the radio, “Jamie, can you hear me? Where are you? We can help. Jamie! You need to answer so we can send someone to help you; the sheriff is here and can be where ever- Jamie!” Lettie was slipping down a slope of panic quickly. Jim felt his stomach twist and turn, not knowing why this situation affected him this way. He struggled to accept the possibility that this may not be a prank, but he told himself that it had to be. This simply surpassed the norm in Mapleton—it was unbelievable. He felt a slight tinge of what Lettie must be going through, a nagging denial that they were experiencing reality. He walked over and put his hand on Lettie’s shoulder, trying his best to comfort her. He spoke again, “Jamie Hacom, what’s going on?

Static again spurted through the speakers, startling both him and Lettie. The voices he swore he could hear before were now completely gone: it sounded more like normal, electric white noise. They jumped again and where completely surprised to hear Jamie laughing into the radio.

“Tim! Stop Tim! That tickles!” She giggled as if he were wresting and tickling her at the same time. They couldn’t hear Tim through the speakers, but Jamie spoke to him as if he was right there, playing with her. The radio abruptly cut out and fell silent.

Lettie wiped her eyes and looked up at him, confused. She asked, “What just happened here, Jim?” He shook his head, his mind reeling and bewildered, then said, “You know, I don’t know. Maybe they were on a cell phone or it dialed on accident or something, I guess that could happen. Or maybe they were just playing a game with each other and we picked it up. Obviously we picked it up, so something must have been transmitting.”

But Jamie Hacom’s sobs rang in his ears and memory. She cried like she was scared, and she stopped as if whatever she was hiding from- He just couldn’t figure it out. Strange for sure, and they probably should send someone over to check on them.

Through the radio, Mark spoke, “Did you guys hear what I just heard? That a joke or something?”

“We don’t know,” Lettie responded, still looking up at Jim for answers. To Mark, Jim said, “Hey, why don’t you come on in. We can talk about it here.”

“Are you sure they’re okay?” Mark asked.

“No,” Jim said back, “I really don’t know what just happened, but I think it was probably a mistake or something. I don’t want to talk about it over the radio though, so come on in to the office.”

“Be there in a few.” After that, nothing but silence on the radio, Jim nodded at Lettie and went back to his office.

To be continued next Friday, August 21, 2015, the full novel to be revealed in parts by Halloween.  


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Friday, August 7, 2015

Monarch: Chapter Five



Chapter Five


SHERIFF JIM HALLOWAY stood next to the counter and stared at the coffee pot forlornly. He watched the water seep through the coffee grounds and drip through the filter into the pot below, causing a small splash in the coffee already produced. Although his eyes followed each drip, his mind drifted far away from anything with caffeine. Like a machine, he reached into a crumpled, brown paper bag and drew out an apple slowly. The drips slowed and finally stopped before he picked up the pot and poured the hot liquid into his mug, taking a bite of the apple as he did. Jim shook himself out of the far away land of thought and returned to the main room of the police station.

The police station was really just an old apartment, originally built for living but modified for use as an office. It was cramped at times, but Jim enjoyed the homey atmosphere and considered it a privilege to work in a place that was so much like his own home. Or how is own home used to be. Lately however, he spent more and more time at the office or out on the road in his truck, driving and watching after the little town he had been entrusted to take care of.

Lettie, his secretary and dispatcher in one, looked up from a flimsy harlequin book and smiled a wide, toothy smile. One did not even have to talk with Lettie to know she was a happy person, as her very being in the room lit it up completely. An older woman with a flowing mane of curly hair and never without a smile, she read constantly. Jim nodded back, but did so only half-heartedly before taking a long swig from his mug. She sighed and folded the corner down of her current page and placed the book aside.

“Jim. You don’t look well,” she commented quietly, concerned but trying to be as casual as possible. Jim knew that she, of course, knew everything that was happening to him, not many secrets made it very long in tiny towns secluded in the forest, but she respected him enough not to come right out and give her advice without him asking for it. He played along with her game, “I never look well, Lettie. You know that.” She chuckled and batted at the air, feigning embarrassment. Jim could never quite figure out what she implied when she made those strange gestures.

“Come on Jim,” she said, “it always helps to talk to someone when you’re mulling through something in the old onion. Problems at home?” The smile had somehow transformed while talking and although she was still the image of giddy happiness, he knew she was sincerely concerned.

“No, Lettie,” he responded, examining the shiny surface of his apple, “we’re fixing those problems, you know. I’m just…” What the hell, he thought. She knew about him and Cindy and their problems—the entire town probably knew, as small towns go—and Lettie probably understood the problems better than he did. He had his reasons for liking his job, and the fact that his home didn’t follow him here was one of them. He took a deep breath, exhaled, and then finished, “I’m just tired. It’s been a long couple of days.” And with that, he turned and walked to his office. Lettie watched him go and sighed. She picked up her book, but could not quite find the pacing she had just had; she wondered why life wasn’t as easy as her harlequin novels.

In his office, Jim took another bite of the apple, but lost the desire to continue eating it as soon as it was in his mouth. With the chunk of apple still in his mouth, he began to cry. Sheriff Halloway was a formidable man, though not necessarily large in size. He stood almost 6 feet tall and was built somewhat heavily, but was still on the small scale compared to most men. He was a bear, though, when it came to the law and his job, and would not let things go – he was not someone you’d like to meet in a dark alley, especially if you and he were on the opposite side of things. Mostly kind and good-natured, he had recently developed a streak of bitterness that ran deep. His life was falling apart around him and nothing he did could stop it.

The front door swung open, slamming into the wall and vibrating the glass of the windows in the small room. Cindy, his attractive wife of 18 years stepped through the door. She gazed at him with eyes that were somehow cold but burned through him with scorching force. She stomped through the room and stood inches away from his face. In another setting, and with different moods floating through the air, the stance would have invited a kiss, but not today.

“Where were you, Jim.” She demanded, not as a question but as a statement of guilt applied squarely to him. “I reminded you and you knew and you broke his heart.”

For a few seconds Jim couldn’t remember what she was talking about, and then it hit him. Their six-year-old son, Caleb, had been working on for several months now. He played the part of King Arthur in a children’s version of Camelot, and was absolutely certain that this play would break him into show business.

Cindy stood in front of him, her nose almost touching his and he stood with his shoulders slumped, defeated. Lettie busied herself with unnecessary paperwork and effectively shrunk from the scene, making herself practically invisible. Jim glanced over at her, noticing her effective maneuver and wished that she would lend a hand. He turned his gaze back to his wife and shook his head slowly. He said, “I don’t know. I’m sorry.”

“I’m sick of hearing you say you’re sorry!” she erupted, “why don’t you ever change what you do rather than just say you’re sorry! You’re son looks up to you, you are his hero and you blew it, you jerk, you blew it again!” She stopped, catching her breath, “Where were you?” The rage in her voice startled him, she had never yelled like this before in their entire marriage. Sure, they’d had their fights, and they were currently in a stagnant relationship freeze, but never this.

“What do you want me to say, Cindy? I’m working. I told you that this morning, I told you that last night. Both you and he knew that I wouldn’t make his play.”

“And I told you how important it was to him that you were there. What’d you do today at work that was so important, that you couldn’t take an hour out of your time, huh? Fish a raccoon out of Mabel’s trash? Did you help someone across the street today? Did you do your good turn? This place is a hole, Jim, and you know it. You could have been with your son if you’d wanted to.”

She stopped talking, choking back something that could have been another explosion or a sob, Jim couldn’t be sure. Jim stood there and thought about how much he had once loved this woman, how he would have done anything for her, and how much he hated her now. She had never yelled at him like this, but she had done a great job making his life miserable for a good portion of their married life. It seemed he could never do enough, and she always demanded more. Maybe it was important for him to have been there at his son’s play, but it was showing again on the weekend and he would make it then. And he had no idea why his son was so set that he be at the school today, for this exact performance, but now was not the time. He responded in a calculated, safe-guarded way that further infuriated his wife but made it possible for him escape the conversation alive.

“Cindy. Can we talk about this at home? Please?” he asked, knowing how pathetic he sounded, but he also felt also stuck in a corner with no way out. He could think of nothing else to say that wouldn’t just anger her more. She looked into his eyes, and for a brief moment he thought he saw a spark of light, a faint glow of warmth, or possibly hope, flash across that part of the eye that conveys the human being beneath. In an instant, however, the spark vanished and the coldness returned.

“No, Jim. No.” she said, hesitating before, “I don’t want you to come home tonight.” She took a deep breath, then, “I think you should find somewhere else to stay.”

“Cindy-,” he started. His wife interrupted quietly, the fight seeming to have leaked out of her, “I’m done, Jim. I can’t do this anymore. I love you too much.” She reached and almost touched his arm, but thought better of it, turned around and walked out the door. Jim stood in place for several seconds, thinking about her last statement about love and scoffed at her in his mind. If she loved him, she would not treat him the way she did, if she really loved him- he stopped. What’s the point? He asked himself. He shook his head bitterly and turned to go back into his office. His life had changed so much within the past few years, and even more drastically in the past few months. He hated how he felt and how he treated people, even the people closest to him. In reality, he missed his family more than anything, despite how he felt when around his wife. Not to mention Caleb, who needed his father. Jim couldn’t think of a reason why his son had needed him there at the specific performance today, but he guessed it didn’t matter; he should have been there. For a moment, he thought about a different time when he and his son had been friends—he and Cindy too. They used to be able to talk, to discuss things, but his wife, rather than approaching him nicely like she used to, began exploding which made him feel that sinking, bitter feeling so common in their recent years. If she loved him, really loved him, she would have- Lettie interrupted his thoughts.

“Aren’t you going to go after her,” Lettie said quietly from her spot behind the desk. Jim sighed and said, “Lettie, this is not a romance novel, where everything works out in the end. This is life.”

She looked away, hurt, and muttered beneath her breath, “then maybe you really don’t deserve her.” Jim almost walked away, upset that he had offended Lettie, but sick of trying to explain himself to everyone he spoke to.

“Listen, Lettie, I’m a Jerk. I’m sorry,” he said, “You’re right and Cindy’s right, I have been a jerk, not just to her but to you too.” He took a deep breath and sighed, “What do you think I could do?” He asked and her response surprised him, she said, “The first thing you should do is go home to her tonight. She clearly needs you right now.”

“Did you hear the conversation? She said explicitly not to come home tonight, to find somewhere else to stay.”

Lettie held up one of her manicured hands to stop him, and responded, “she said those things cause she’s mad. She also told you that she loves you and doesn’t like fighting with you. Your wife is pleading for you to come back to her, not just physically, tonight, but emotionally as well. She misses you.”

Jim chuckled, “I’m not sure we heard the same, screaming woman. I’m pretty sure that she doesn’t miss me at all.”

“That’s where you’re wrong. Trust me.”

***

Darkness overtook the town before Kevin reached the diner. The night had come quickly, darkening the streets and extending the shadows from the trees and buildings to create a general pool of blackness. Fog swept through the trees and around the buildings like a devilish specter. The mist coated everything with moisture, including the street, giving it a glimmer whenever light shone upon it. The storm still hovered in the distance, but several rogue clouds had floated through the deep blue sky, closing in on the city. The full moon, swollen with light, occasionally shone through the clouds like an eerie spotlight.

Kevin walked slowly through the streets and up to the entrance of Mabel’s diner. The lights shone through the front window onto the street below. Before walking up the steps, Kevin turned and glanced up the street. The buildings and street were dark and empty. The single stop light in the town had switched from its cycle and now just blinked yellow. Just across the street, lights still glowed at the police station, and several cars occupied a few of the parking spaces in front of the building.

Kevin stood deep in thought and watched the town fall asleep. He couldn’t shake the feeling that accompanied him from his room and he dreaded going back. A nice aroma awoke his senses and shook him from thoughts of the day’s events. The thought of his wife also entered his mind and he made a mental note to give her a call when he got back to the room. Maybe this place wasn’t where he would spend his month away, if he kept getting distracted like this—he didn’t think he’d ever have time to work. He thought that maybe a nice cup of coffee and a meal, with a slice of pumpkin pie to top it off, would help clear his mind and allow him to get started with his temporary new life in Mapleton.

He turned back to the diner and started up the stairs, but stopped. Something caught his eye as he turned, but he really wasn’t sure what it was. He turned back to the police station and stared, trying to find what had caught his attention so completely. He saw a woman sitting at a desk through the front window, and a man who appeared to be the sheriff was talking to her, standing like a pathetic teenager, with an expression on his face indicating that either he was upset about something or had just eaten a rotten grape.

To the side of the building was the town bank, separated from the police station by a tiny alley. In the shadows of the alley, a man stood watching him. Kevin could not make out anything other than his shadow, but the massive size of the man seemed somehow familiar.

“Creepy hillbillies,” Kevin muttered under his breath as he turned back to the diner. He stopped cold when he realized why the man looked familiar. The chill that spent so much on his spine today went fanatical, making him shudder. He remembered the television flickering onto an image of a country highway, bordered by thick forest. A figure had stood off in the shadows, just beyond the tree line. The man watching him from the alley had a remarkably similar shadow to the other he had just seen an hour ago on the television. Kevin was frozen on the steps of the diner, not wanting to turn and look, but knowing that he had to, that his shaky frame of mind depended on it. In one motion, he whipped around to face the shadow in the alley, and was startled (secretly thankful) to see that the man no longer stood in the shadows; in fact, Kevin couldn’t see the man at all. Kevin looked up and down the street, looking for anyone resembling the shadow in the alley. The moon slid behind some clouds, casting the street into further darkness, but despite the darkness, Kevin saw that he was alone.

His eyes fell again on the dark alley, to the side of the police station. He briefly debated going to the station and talking to the sheriff about the suspicious man in the alley, but the sheriff was waving his arms and speaking rather heatedly, making himself appear more like a buffoon than he had before. Kevin had some real doubts about this place; it seemed that he simply picked the wrong town.

The darkness in the alley shifted and Kevin thought that maybe the guy was still in there, hiding and watching him. Of course the creep was still there, he thought, why would it be any different right now than it had been all day? Why not just load every creepy thing you can into one day and see what happens.

“The population of Mapleton is going to be one person less by tomorrow morning,” Kevin muttered, “that’s what happens.” Having come to a decision, he took a deep breath and started across the wide street toward the alley on the other side.

The shadows shifted again and Kevin wondered how he saw the shifting—looking into the alley was like looking into a cave, completely dark and shapeless. He supposed that maybe a source of light towards the rear caused the shift when the person moved, but Kevin could see nothing but darkness. His footsteps echoed hollowly through the street as he walked. The mist was thick now, and spreading quickly.

Before he reached the other side of the street, he began to smell the dead, electric odor of rotting flesh, so strong that it stung his nostrils and made his lungs ache, much like breathing in bitter cold air. He lifted his shirt up and over his mouth and began to breath through the cloth to lessen the effects of the stench, but his makeshift mask only enhanced the sensation of death in his mouth.

The mouth of the alley loomed like some gigantic monster waiting for him in the darkness. The smell only got worse as he got closer to the shadows between the two brick walls. A low whisper and a shuffle made him stop dead in his tracks, the echoes of his footsteps reverberating on the walls; then ceasing. The smell unbearably caught in his throat, unmoving, and Kevin realized what he had before mistaken as the static smell of electricity, smelled more like the stagnant, metallic smell of iron, reminding him distinctly of breathing through a bloody nose.

He was careful not to enter the darkness of shadows. “Hello?” he asked into the darkness, “I know you’re in there and you don’t scare me, if that’s what you’re trying to do.” No answer. He heard something shuffle, moving like a zombie in one of those old movies. “I don’t know why you’d scare me, but it certainly seems that you’re trying to. Who are you?”

Another shuffle or maybe a whisper, then silence. Kevin said, in a voice that he thought commanded respect, “I’m coming in there. So if you want to scare me, do it now, cause when I’m in there I’ll be mad as hell.” He sighed as he stepped closer, peering into the realms of darkness, sure that the guy in there called his bluff. The fear that rose within him reminded him of a time when, as a child, he watched a horror film with his father. Afterward his dad had asked him to turn off an upstairs light. He obeyed, doing the task quickly, then, running back down the stairs to the light and company of other people, his father simply reached his arm through the railing of the stairs. The action was juvenile, but it was enough to cause terror to explode within and push Kevin into unconsciousness. He passed out and fell down the rest of the stairs. The fear he felt now was much the same as he had felt then, almost enveloping his body and causing him to pass out. Adding to the uneasiness that rumbled and coiled inside of him, he felt cold. He pulled his jacket tighter around his shoulders, realizing that he was much colder than he should have been in this weather. His body quivered as he peered into the shadows a second longer—he needed to get inside and get warmed up.

Another whisper, slightly louder this time, brought Kevin back to reality and the task at hand. He asked into the darkness, “I didn’t hear you. Do you need help or something?” The voice that responded scratched his eardrums like sandpaper on his ears, somehow screeching at the same time that it scraped and rumbled. It said something he didn't quite understand.

Kevin stepped closer to the alley, so close that if had taken another step, he would have stepped into shadow. He leaned forward; peering into the space just beyond. It appeared to be empty, but somehow he knew that something more terrible than he could ever imagine waited for him in the dark. Something sinister that would crush his sanity, along with his body, and leave him for dead. Kevin knew that the line where the shadow of the alley met the pavement was a line that separated him from a loony bin, and raving craziness. Another voice from behind saved him.

“What, you don’t have alleys where you come from? I’d show you more, but I think this is the only one the town has to offer.” Pastor Henri stood several feet behind Kevin, smiling. Kevin turned, slightly shaken, and grinned sheepishly. Henri continued, “We have a little space behind the market, but I think that’s the only other place that even comes close to being an alley. Sorry about that.” The pastor shrugged, “It’s a small town.”

Kevin shook his head and offered his hand to the other man. He said, “I’m Kevin Johnson, from down in Charlotte. I’m just passing through.”

“You intend to stay awhile don’t you?” Henri asked, and watched Kevin turn his head several times toward the alley as if watching or waiting for something to happen. It took Kevin several seconds to respond, his mind still on that guy in the shadows.

“I was going to stay, but I don’t know. I’m working on a pretty big project and I’m looking for a place a little,” another glance over his shoulder, “less distracting.”

“My name is Henri, I’m the pastor here in town,” he looked into the alley curiously, “I hope you change your mind. This is a beautiful town and I’m sure it will work to your benefit to stay.” Kevin shook his head, determined not to look again. He crossed over the sidewalk closer to Henri and put his hands in his pockets. He said, “Oh I don’t disagree, this place is pretty. Today though… has just been strange for me.” The pastor nodded toward the east and smiled.

“I’m sure it’s just the storm,” he commented, “you know how it gets with all those negative and positive charges in the air. And it looks to be a whopper.”

“You saw it too?” Kevin asked, feeling his senses returning little by little. The line he had almost crossed, onto the stage of insanity, seemed to be moving farther and farther away. Something had changed in his mind though, as if released by some invisible force. Before, he had been obsessed with the film he had seen on television, and when he had seen the man in the shadows, he had obsessed about that as well. Now, however, a resonating calm filled his mind, a calmness that told him to dismiss everything he had heard and seen that day, similar to the invitation he thought he’d felt when he neared the alley. The preacher’s laughing pulled him back into reality, away from his reflections.

“Is something wrong, Mr. Johnson?” Henri chuckled, “I mean, if you want me to leave you alone with the alley, that’s fine. But why don’t we go get a bite to eat first.” The pastor motioned to the diner then took Kevin by the arm. He continued, “You really ought not to stand out here in the cold so long, you’re wearing a jacket and you still feel like a corpse.”

The comment startled Kevin who, now fully aware of the conversation, cocked his head curiously, and asked, “How long was I standing there? It couldn’t have been more than a few minutes.”

“I live just up the street, in an apartment above the church,” Henri said, “and it took me about 30 minutes to shuffle my body over here. You were standing there, looking into that alley when I came out of my apartment. You’ve been standing there for a good part of an hour.”

To be continued next Friday, August 14, 2015, the full novel to be revealed in parts by Halloween.  


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Friday, July 31, 2015

Monarch: Chapter Four


To begin with the Prologue of this serial novel, Monarch, please start here. 

Chapter Four

Kevin heard the six words, spoken through the girl’s radio in her truck and his chest filled with dread. The frequency and pitch of the voice rattled in his teeth, hitting a nerve– a metallic, stinging sensation. The image closed in on the girls face, and the television turned off, casting the room into darkness. For some reason, the images he had just witnessed seemed like more than just a movie—almost real life, but not quite—so real that it passed into the realms of surrealism. The images were exactly how he’d have seen them if he had been standing right next to the truck, actually touching the broken glass and pooling blood. It was as if he had tasted her bruised lips when she screamed, heard with his own ears the strange, rasping voice, which came through the speakers of her car. He realized, all too soon, that the sounds did not come from within the car, but reverberating in his mind as well. He knew of no movie that captured feelings such as these. He had just seen a truck overturned by-

Kevin began to laugh.

It came out as a chuckle at first, then hysterics took over.  He stood up and held himself steady on the bed, as he laughed too hard to maintain balance. Once again, he allowed something to become more than reality. He shook his head, absolutely confused as to why he had thought the film on television represented anything more than just a movie. It was simply a cheaply made, Spanish movie on the Spanish channel the television turned too. The snow and static meant either an old television or a poor connection. 

 I’m nuts, he thought, absolutely, certifiably, bananas.

Kevin glanced at his watch, surprised to see that only a few minutes had passed, yet the weather outside had changed drastically. He stopped laughing when he realized that he sounded just as loco as he had felt after watching those few minutes on television. He walked over to the drapes and opened them at once, wanting a bit of sunshine to bleed into this little room. The clouds from the oncoming storm completely covered the remaining light of the sun and thunder rumbled in the distance. The storm, not quite upon this little town, but certainly coming fast, loomed upon them. He felt someone’s eyes on him, someone prying into his mind.

“This is silly,” he muttered to himself and pulled his soft briefcase onto the old desk. He pulled out his computer, his pads of paper, and stacked them on top of each other. Again, he stopped and looked around the little room. To think of that movie as reality brought him to the edge of his sanity. He wanted the thoughts to dissipate, but the uneasy feeling in the room simply would not leave. A dark, heavy cloud of apprehension and anxiety hung near the ceiling like rumbling clouds of smoke. He needed to get out of that room, and quickly. Wringing his hands and pacing he tried to decide where to go and what to do. The anxiety built, causing his stomach to dry heave, gags rising in his throat. He no longer cared where he went; he grabbed his dark blue jacket and baseball cap and walked out the door.

The moment he stepped outside the room, he felt a small amount of relief, but the uneasiness that accompanied his few moments in the hotel room remained strong. The storm seemed to be standing still, growing and gaining mass before it plummeted upon the city. Kevin watched it curiously, and suspected that it was the first real storm of the season, where the cool air would become even colder, to the point that it contracted your lungs and bit into your nostrils when you breathed. He shook his attention away from the dark clouds and walked down the building to the lobby. His footsteps thumped on the asphalt and he noticed that there were no other people or cars on the street. For a short moment, he felt alone, out in the open, seeming to be the only person willing to face the purple and black mass in the distance. The sun had almost completely disappeared and the breeze transformed into a steady wind, blowing the branches off the trees and making them creak and crack. Leaves blew around his feet and slapped at this legs as he entered the lobby.

The lobby felt warm and comfortingly guarded from the outside. Kevin looked across the empty desk into the back room, trying to see Michael. He called for the clerk, but received no answer. The door closed behind him, the bell jingling softly and he heard several thumps in the room above him. Kevin smiled as he heard Michael come running down some unseen stairs, imagining the man bumbling excitedly to meet him. He almost chuckled when the hotel clerk burst into the room, wiping his face and doing his best to remain calm.

“Mr. Johnson, hello.” He said, and then extended his hand for Kevin to shake. Michael’s shoulders slumped and he spoke quickly, as if he knew that Kevin teetered on the verge of getting the dodge out of this city and leaving the hotel for good. “I’m sorry about the wait, did you wait long? Is everything all right in the room?”

“No, everything is perfectly fine. I just wondered where a good place to eat would be?” Kevin asked, smiling as he watched the nervous little man in front of him sigh with relief and literally shudder with excitement. Michael responded, “I was just eating myself actually, and you’re more than welcome to join me if you’d like, but if not, which is totally fine, there is a diner just down the street, called Mabel’s. You can’t miss it. Just across from the church and next to the police station.”

Weird. Maybe this guy is related to Bates after all, thought Kevin. He shook his head and motioned to the door.

“Thanks. I think I’ll head over there and see if I can get something to eat.” Kevin walked to the door, but turned and as an afterthought, "I’m looking forward to breakfast tomorrow morning though.” Michael’s eyes lit up and he almost burst with pride. Jeeze, this guy must really not get out, Kevin thought, or he probably just doesn’t get a whole lot of business. Michael rambled on about what they would have for breakfast in the morning. He smiled and nodded. Michael was debating with himself about whether waffles or pancakes would be better for breakfast. Kevin interrupted.

“I saw a movie on television earlier,” he said, “maybe the Spanish channel; in any case I’m curious to know which movie I saw. Do you have a TV guide or something?” Michael stopped his personal debate and stared at him curiously.

“Do you get cable on your lap top?” He asked. Kevin shook his head and chuckled, despite himself. The guy is a trip, so literally caught up with his own conversation and unable to put a couple of thoughts together.

“No. The TV in the room; it’s not a big deal, I just wondered because the movie was… interesting.” Kevin replied, afraid that Michael would develop a complex over his stay in his motel. Michael responded slowly, carefully, “Are you sure you didn’t watch the television at a hotel on the way here? At home maybe?”

“No, just a few minutes ago, before I came over here.” Kevin said, “Why?”

The little clerk looked him up and down, obviously confused.

“Because…” Michael started, “Television has been out for a few weeks here at the Alpine Resort. They don’t work.”



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Friday, July 24, 2015

Monarch: Chapter Three



To begin with the Prologue of this serial novel, Monarch, please start here. 


Chapter Three

Kevin finished unpacking his things into the tiny chest of drawers. He liked the room, and it had a similar feel to the lobby—someone certainly tried hard to make this little motel clean and presentable. The room was just like any other you’d see at a motel with only six rooms. It had a small closet that housed a built-in ironing board and an old iron. The bathroom left little room for anything else but standing, but the tub seemed big enough for him to soak—a great time for new ideas, at least in Kevin’s opinion. A twin bed took up most of the space in the room, and a small couch sat under the window, leaving only inches to navigate between the two pieces of furniture. A television rested on top of the drawers, just opposite the bed, and a small writing desk snuggled nicely in one corner with a few postcards and envelopes stacked on top. The desk had long rivets and scars running down the surface.

He plopped down on the bed, exhausted. The drive from Charlotte, North Carolina, Kevin's hometown, took several more hours than he’d expected. It seemed like forever since he’d seen and kissed his wife, Cami,goodbye and his thoughts drifted to her. They had been fighting more and more lately, and this time away from each other would act as a mini-separation to help them collect their thoughts and make the relationship better. For a while, hell seemed to have taken board in their lives, ruining what they held most dear. He loved her though, and he conscientiously tried to make the changes in himself. He missed her already. Hopefully, the separation wouldn’t be long term, hopefully it would work—he simply couldn’t bear to be without her.

The phone rang, startling him from his thoughts. He picked it up on the third ring and said, “This is Kevin.”

Only static. The noise lasted a few seconds and then cut out, leaving Kevin in silence. He heard a voice. Someone, a woman, spoke very softly—but he heard the tone and knew it was a woman. Cami? For some reason, Kevin thought of the storm. The electric smell of thunder and lighting seemed to emit from the phone. A faint rotting smell made the sensation more complex and strange—and then it was over. He stared at the phone a few seconds before placing it back in its cradle. He immediately picked it up again without thinking, and dialed his home in Charlotte.

He had just dialed the number when the television clicked on. The machine looked several years old, so the tubes took some time to heat and produce a clear picture. A few seconds past, Kevin watching curiously as the channels changed on their own, stopping on a Spanish speaking soap opera. He chuckled and placed the phone back in the cradle, crossed the room and turned the television off. The switch jiggled too loosely and the television did not respond.

“Well, what did you expect?” Kevin muttered, and he reached for the phone again, this time to call the front desk.

The image suddenly changed and the angle now captured a long road, trees lining it completely. A single truck drove down the road, the leaves swirling behind it in little whirlwinds. In the east, a storm brewed, much like the one he had just seen outside, but even more dark and intense. The angle did not change, but followed the truck as it approached. Seconds past and the angle did not change. The truck just neared. Kevin had seen shots as long as this in other movies, and he didn’t think that this was French. The mind liked change on the screen, or it got bored, even subconsciously. The scene captured the beauty of this town and the surrounding areas—as if the film had been shot very near Mapleton. It almost seemed live. The colors and lighting were exactly as he had seen it when he drove into town.

The image changed again and the camera then moved with the truck. He could see two people sitting together in the cab, a man and a woman. They spoke to each other, but he couldn’t hear what they were saying. Kevin knelt close to the screen, looking down the street on which the truck drove. A sign stood on the side of the road announcing their arrival into Mapleton City limits. A shot of static blurred the image for a brief second and Kevin felt a twinge of panic followed by a chill. The picture regained its clarity. For a moment, Kevin thought that the film welcomed visitors at the motel—but a certain quality gnawed at the edges of Kevin’s mind. Something seemed unreal about the image. The picture was too clear for the television, and even if it had been a high definition television, the picture was still too perfect. It was as if Kevin were watching the event unfold himself.

The truck continued to drive, and the camera followed along with it. He moved closer to the television, so close his nose almost touched. Perhaps a mile down the road, in the direction the truck drove, stood a lone figure, silhouetted against the sun shining through the trees. The chill that he had felt earlier, intensified to the point where he shivered. The figure, the shadow, stood there and watched the truck approach. A deep sense of foreboding filled Kevin’s chest. The film played on the television—if it was a film—but it had to be a film, he thought, what else could it be? The images appeared so real but random and illogical at the same time. It inspired more uneasiness than he had ever felt before while watching a movie. Kevin touched the screen with his fingers and continued to watch.

***

The sun faded quickly into the west, but still had the strobe effect as it shone through the trees and into the truck as it sped by. Jamie thought about their house, taken in to an almost hypnotic state by the flashing colors and light just outside the window.

“So,” Jamie said slowly, “are we going to build a one or two story?”

Tim cocked his head to one side thoughtfully, and then said, “I think two stories, with four rooms or so. If we have more than four kids then they can just share rooms or we can just build on.”

“Kids?” she said, her eyebrow raised slightly, “I thought you didn’t want kids right away.” He laughed and squeezed her knee slightly.

“I think maybe we could start sooner than later. I mean, we’ll have a house and all.” She took hold of his arm and snuggled close to him. He tried to change the subject, a little uneasy about how quickly she grasped at the idea of children.

“You want to watch a movie tonight?” he asked. “We could get a scary one.”

She started to answer but movement up ahead caught her eye. Someone stood just beyond the tree line, in the shadows, watching them. The person shadow reached into the branches, impossibly tall, and it silhouetted against the setting sun, making it appear black. She jumped slightly, pulling away from Tim and pointing off into the foliage, “do you see that guy over-“,

But she stopped when she realized that Tim wasn’t paying attention. The person stood too far from the road to be immediately visible, and they passed the shadow quickly—Tim not even noticing. She turned to look behind them as they drove, and realized that he had stepped out from the trees and stared at her from almost the center of the road. She faced forward, quickly. Tim put his hand on her leg and asked, “Did you say something?”

“Nothing… it’s nothing.” She said, slightly disturbed, “I just thought I saw something on the side of the road.” She had seen the guy, and he had been watching her. She doubted at first, but the fact that he had walked to the center of the road and stared at them as they drove off into the swirling leaves confirmed it. The man had been tall; enormous even, and though the sunlight blocked his features at first, giving the appearance of darkness, when the person stepped out of the trees he looked as dark and shadow covered as he had while standing in the dimness of the forest. The sight of him caused a lump of anxiety to build in her throat and cut off her rationality. What if the man followed them home, snuck into their house while they slept and did a smiley face number on their lips with a knife – the image of Tim in bed, his mouth cut open up the sides of his face… she put her fingers to her temples and massaged deeply, completely unaware as to where these thoughts came from.

What if it wasn’t a man at all, but some demonic creature that wanted not to bathe in their blood, but to feast on their souls? A monster. It was a monster, she knew without knowing. And it wanted them—it wanted her. To hunt. To kill. She thought that it would put a log in the road ahead, so they would have to stop. Or throw rocks. She shuddered at the thought, breathing heavily. She told herself to calm down, to think of something else. She knew that her grip on control and reality was slipping.

“Honey?” Tim asked, noticing her sudden withdraw from the conversation, “what is it? What’s the matter?”

Jamie began to answer, but before she could a jolt shot through her mind, much like she imagined it would feel like if she stuck her fingers into an electricity socket and recharged her body. The bolt caused a bright light to flood her eyes and thought, replaced by fuzz that melted into the edges of her vision. A sudden, pounding headache filled her head, but seemed different than any other sort of pain she had ever felt in her head before. It felt like someone trying to rip open her mind like a can of fruit without the can opener. She closed her eyes and shook her head, trying to clear her mind, but couldn’t. Tim continued to stare at her, worried now. He massaged her leg gently.

“Baby? Are you all right?”

She screamed a horrible bellow and slapped his hand away. Instantly she looked up at him and began to cry. She said, “Tim… something is wrong with-“

Her sentence cut short as a large rock launched through the air toward their car. Tim saw it coming, but for the second and a half that it soared toward them, he watched it, as if it sailed in slow motion. He reached out, instinctively, to hold Jamie in her seat as the rock slammed into the windshield. The rock lodged in the glass, sending spider webs to the edges and obscuring any chance of seeing. Tim swerved to the right just as another rock crashed through the driver’s side window. The glass imploded into the car and the rock hit Tim in the head, splattering blood onto Jamie’s face. She screamed as the truck spun out of control and veered off the road.

The figure stood on the side of the road and just beyond the trees, watching them. Jamie felt her sanity slipping, no longer certain it was a person, though it looked and felt like a human being. The eyes could not be seen but she still felt them boring a hole into her like a scalding-hot nail being pushed through her soul. Jamie stared for only a second longer before the truck smashed into a tree. Her head rocketed forward into the dashboard, slicing a large gash across her forehead. Blood flooded her eyes as she turned to look at her husband. He lay motionless in the seat beside her, blood pouring from a slash in his head and pooling on the seat below him. His once blond hair matted in red globs against his head – she could see his skull under a torn flap of skin.

“Tim!” She screamed, grabbing his head and pulling him into her arms, kissing him not out of passion, but out of the fear of losing him. Kissing brought him close to her, unified them. “Tim! Wake up!” She suddenly remembered the figure in the woods and jerked her head up, looking wildly into the forest surrounding the truck.

Nothing. No sign of the figure or who ever had thrown the rocks at their truck. The person smiled at me, she thought. Jamie shook her head and focused again on her unconscious husband. His chest heaved with breath—in and out, and she heaved a sigh of relief. But a red stream of blood now ran off the seats to the floor of the car. Blood from his body—she knew that if she didn’t stop the bleeding, he would lose too much. Bleed out and die. Tears rolled down her face, mixing with the blood and dripping onto Tim. She held him tightly and closed her eyes.

It watched her, staring with a vivid and piercing look that almost made her vomit. She felt a sensation like she had never felt before, as if the thing had suddenly become a part of her, searching the darkest corners of her mind and body. A sickening, rotting smell filled her nostrils, causing that strange muscle in her throat to quiver. The smell reminded her of time when an animal somehow got between the drywall and the outside of her house and died. The sick, rancid odor of death with a slightly sweet twist, as if someone had recently doused a dead animal with sweet bath oils, floated through the air. Her dying husband in her lap, their truck totaled, and yet she could think of nothing other than this thing that stood somewhere beyond their twisted-metal cage.

The radio burst to life, exploding with static and a jumble of songs and commentary, then grew suddenly quiet. From deep within the speakers, almost created by the magnets themselves, came a gravely, guttural voice that stung her eyes and the smell intensified.

“What do you fear?” the voice asked. Jamie listened, her entire body shaking. She spit blood and tears from her mouth and it rolled down her chin. She cried harder.

“Answer…” it said through the speakers. Static again burst, drowning out the awful potential of further conversation with this voice.

“Leave me alone!” she screamed, slamming her fist into the dash. The radio fell silent. Suddenly, something hit the side of the truck and sent a deafening, crunching sound into the tiny cab. The truck lifted off the ground and tumbled across the street. It rolled several times until it smashed another tree and stopped, resting on its roof. The metal creaked and groaned under the weight of the truck. Julie undid her seat belt and crashed to the roof of the car. Outside, shattered glass spread out over the road. She maneuvered herself next to her husband and held him close, kissing his cheek and pressing her head into his shoulder.

Glass crunched outside the truck as someone walked toward them. The speakers sparked to life once again, “I am coming. I am here.”



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